Age/Gender: 18, Female
Location: New Mexico
Job: comic artist i guess
i love sonic pokemon zelda and OKAMI!!!! ~<3 i do fanart and am now working with flash, im not the best at flash but im not the worst XD, as a short note, im more active on my deviantart account so please stop by ^^ BTW im only 15 XD
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ik! ik! its a WIP! but STILL! try reducing the length of the scene at the beggening that dragged on for 2 minutes by either getting into the movie you have so far or swith between diffrent shots of the lands scape
ALSO try to smooth out the movements of the flash, its seems like to move the pictur you used anywhere from 2 to 10 frames in some areas, try giving the frames shorter moving distants to give it a smooher movement and thpply a motiontwen to the frames,
what you have so far DOES HAVE POTENTAL but plz try fix the overall flash so you dont bore your watcher
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i REALLY wish i had found this before i bombed 4 of my finals! nic game :3
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5/5
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this is awesome! i love how you made it impossible to cheat and added a bit of sifficulty to the levels so its not boring.
5/5 +10/10!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it! :)
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i can see you must have put quite a bit of effort into this, not bad. the plot could be just a little longer, i did'nt really understand exactly what was going on in the time it played, i jut got the idea
the drawings seemed off in some areas, but i dont blame you, flash is alot harder to make look good ^w^
i like how this is set in the near future, it adds a bit of wonder to the story,
so 3/5 + 8/10 :3 not bad
Author's Response:
Thanks, yep. Don't worry, I'm still experimenting with flash and I'm going to fix up everything I've done wrong here in the next episode without explaining everything at face-value. Keeping the solution to a mystery to my self...
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"Was this youtube poop at one point?"
its not a bad attempt at creating a flash in the start, but...you should try to animate a little more and actually draw gannon, and mckmason is right, Fsjals are REALLY GAY!!!! XP
sorry
1/5 and 2/10
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XD lol thanks for the link to your NG account XD nice flash btw *faves*
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not every person who clicks this cant draw, some people just want to see how others do it, but i am curious, why start with their eyes? a cricle works better when making guide lines and making things proportional (if i spelled that right) and the way you have them drawn out makes it look like you just traced all of them
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heh heh i knew tails would be in it >XD this game is really easy with a tablet XD although im not sure if i should be against it being a girl and all XD so ima just smile ^_____^;
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