an A for effort
i can see you must have put quite a bit of effort into this, not bad. the plot could be just a little longer, i did'nt really understand exactly what was going on in the time it played, i jut got the idea
the drawings seemed off in some areas, but i dont blame you, flash is alot harder to make look good ^w^
i like how this is set in the near future, it adds a bit of wonder to the story,
so 3/5 + 8/10 :3 not bad